First cut feedback

After listening to the comments below we decided that our next steps will be to add sound to our clip, for example a soundtrack or effects.We will also decide where and put the titles and eye-dents in. We will also be working on making sure that the viewer is kept entertained by doing things like shortening some of the walking scenes and changing the duration of the transitions to give more of an effect.

Strengths
Weaknesses
The mood and atmosphere created was effective.

The cam recorder filter fitted well with the chosen shots.

The filter we put on when editing worked well.

The bruise we created with eye shadow was very realistic.

The contrast between the high and low key shots is good but also the order of the shots.

Fade transitions worked well especially for.

There is a clear narrative.
Questions are raised – this is a convention of the thriller genre.
There was no audio so it made some of the shots seem a little too long, they seemed to drag.

Would like to see sharper transitions to help build the tension.

The scene where Imogen is on her own looks out of place, maybe move it so it makes more sense.

Also we might need to move the candle scene to give it more effect e.g.  at the end as the title appears.

Need to see if we can lighten the dark scenes as they are a little to dark.
There were not titles.

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