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Shooting script
This was our feedback. we have taken into account the facts that some one said the there may be 'too few shots', we agree with this and when it comes to our real shooting script we will develop the plot further to try and fill the time gap. Someone also commented 'how long will the shot last for ?' ,we actually forgot about this and again will be adding it to the final draft. One person said that the plot comes across slightly confusing. This is deliberate because we wanted a non-chronological order for the title sequence. Its a convention that helps to raise questions in the audience.
Pitch Feedback
Strengths: Origional Plot and Plot twist Detailed/intresting Storyline, very effective Very relatable Good use of lighting Fits the genre well Provokes questions Weaknesses: Will it be hard to find a setting ?- we are going to do lots of close ups in the opening sequence so the location doesnt matter so much. Might be too much to fit in an opening sequence- we arent doing the whole plot in the opening. Make sure you dont give too much away in the opening. How will you show the police- the police bit isnt in the opening sequence.
Survey Results
The most common age of a person that took the survey was 15 to 19 years old , then 20+ then 16 to 14. More females than males took the survey. It was quite close but it seem that yes people would perfer to have strory put in non chronological order , it is a typical thriller convention. The most popular themes from our survey are Plot twist and Mystery! People said characteristics such as bravery, strong , courage , protective and determined. The surveyers said films like Taken,Psyco and Limitless.
